Script Draft 1
We decided that we would use Laura's script idea to base our film on, however we all input different ideas and ended up changing the plot of Laura's script quite drastically. This is the first rough draft of the script.
Deadeye First Draft | |
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Script Draft 2
In this draft we slightly changed the ending so that it would be more feasible - we realised that we would not be able to rip the same teddy up twice so we changed the end of the woods scene to Faye setting a photograph alight.
Deadeye Second Draft | |
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Script Draft 3
We added a short opening scene, which will be a long shot of Faye sitting in a waiting room outside the hypnotist's office. This will be a long single shot, and Faye will be framed in the bottom left of the shot, and the opening credits will run in the space next to her. We also added a graphic - the first time Faye closes her eyes and the scene fades to black, the definition of 'Deadeye' will appear on the screen and then disappear.
Deadeye Third Draft | |
File Size: | 19 kb |
File Type: | celtx |
Final Script
Deadeye Final Script | |
File Size: | 20 kb |
File Type: | celtx |
Shot Lists
After writing our script we have produced a shot list for each scene. We have put the information into a table; one column for the shot type, one for the action that will occur and then one for any additional information.
Shot List Scene 1 | |
File Size: | 19 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Shot List Scene 2 | |
File Size: | 24 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Scene 3 Final Shot List | |
File Size: | 17 kb |
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Shot List Scene 4 | |
File Size: | 17 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Scene 1 Final Shot List | |
File Size: | 39 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Scene 2 Final Shot List | |
File Size: | 21 kb |
File Type: | docx |
Scene 4 Final Shot List | |
File Size: | 15 kb |
File Type: | docx |
Animatic
We feel as though the sounds used to accompany the shots fit well, although we will use diegetic sounds as well when it comes to the final film. Also we used a male actor for the animatic to play the role of a female character, and the ripped pieces of paper represent the stuffing of the teddy bear which will be ripped during the final film. We were not able to use all of the props we plan to use in the final film, so there will be more memory objects when it comes to the actual production. We also want to use a different forest location, as there are houses visible here and we would like the protagonist to appear more isolated in the actual film. The woods we used in our animatic were also too small to show her traveling over a longer distance as she rushes away from her memories.
Questionnaires
We created a questionnaire for people to fill in as they watched our animatic. The questionnaires gave us several main pieces of advice about our ideas:
1. Several people suggested we use a handheld camera for the montage scene, which we were planning to do anyway but this confirms that it would work well for that scene.
2. Most of the people who viewed the animatic wanted more explanation of why Faye was being hypnotised in the first place, so we will add more dialogue into our script between Faye and the hypnotist.
3. Several of the viewers thought that we had chosen good locations for our film and liked the idea of setting the chase scene in the woods.
4. It was mentioned that people wanted more emotion from the character, however this was a limitation of creating the animatic without our actor and there will be more emotion in the final film.
1. Several people suggested we use a handheld camera for the montage scene, which we were planning to do anyway but this confirms that it would work well for that scene.
2. Most of the people who viewed the animatic wanted more explanation of why Faye was being hypnotised in the first place, so we will add more dialogue into our script between Faye and the hypnotist.
3. Several of the viewers thought that we had chosen good locations for our film and liked the idea of setting the chase scene in the woods.
4. It was mentioned that people wanted more emotion from the character, however this was a limitation of creating the animatic without our actor and there will be more emotion in the final film.
Call Sheets
Before shooting our scenes we decided that it would be best for there to be a means by which we would all be able to have an accurate idea of what was happening on each day and so we produced a schedule of each day we were going to be shooting. Additionally, the names and contact details, as well as other information that we deemed to be important before we would be able to start filming any of our scenes were included to give us our call sheets.
Call Sheet Thurs 22nd Dec 2011 | |
File Size: | 93 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Call Sheet Wed 18th Jan 2012 | |
File Size: | 74 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Call Sheet Sat 28th Jan 2012 | |
File Size: | 111 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Call Sheet Mon 13th Feb 2012 | |
File Size: | 62 kb |
File Type: | doc |
Audience Feedback
After we finished the draft of our film, it was screened to the class. We gave each individual a question and got them to answer them for the camera.